turps (
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2021-03-27 07:03 pm (UTC)
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Yeah, that's my level of analysing too.
I had a scan back over a lot of my other stories and the very short first line start is very much a thing. No setting of scenes here it seems.
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I had a scan back over a lot of my other stories and the very short first line start is very much a thing. No setting of scenes here it seems.