Re-reading it, I can see how it works for a non-MX/SDB fan only. I think it's totally awesome, the way you portrayed Emma's abilities through Lance's perceptions of them; he was still wired to the moon on adrenaline, senses hyper-sharp, and noticed how she seemed to always know or realize what he was feeling.
...and quickly suppressed a smile...
I =LOVED= this part, it was so subtle, and yet so completely Emma; I think you portrayed her just as the character was intended to be. And then the "hypnosis" at the end... ..Heeeeeee!!!
Shalimar jealous! Song dedication to biggest fans!!
ROTFLMAO!!!!
Hee. And I could just _so_ see Adam's soft smile of simultaneous indulgence & forbearance as he admonishes Em... *snicker*
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Love it, love it, love it.
Re-reading it, I can see how it works for a non-MX/SDB fan only. I think it's totally awesome, the way you portrayed Emma's abilities through Lance's perceptions of them; he was still wired to the moon on adrenaline, senses hyper-sharp, and noticed how she seemed to always know or realize what he was feeling.
...and quickly suppressed a smile...
I =LOVED= this part, it was so subtle, and yet so completely Emma; I think you portrayed her just as the character was intended to be. And then the "hypnosis" at the end... ..Heeeeeee!!!
Shalimar jealous! Song dedication to biggest fans!!
ROTFLMAO!!!!
Hee. And I could just _so_ see Adam's soft smile of simultaneous indulgence & forbearance as he admonishes Em... *snicker*