Lovely, the first three paragraphs are perfect. I like this a lot, too:
his hair styled in that pitiful hybrid Mohawk that’ll be flat against his head within minutes; an inevitable casualty in the skirmish between styling products and the compulsory hair ruffle of affectionate greeting.
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his hair styled in that pitiful hybrid Mohawk that’ll be flat against his head within minutes; an inevitable casualty in the skirmish between styling products and the compulsory hair ruffle of affectionate greeting.
I think I'm saving this.