The transformation was icky! I wonder what Lance's wings said, we never got to see them... And Kevin! All broken and guiltridden. It didn't feel cliché-ish to me at all 'cause I can imagine him being the kind of guy who puts enormous demands on himself to be perfect in whatever he does.

You really killed off the girl in the last story! I was hoping she would make it, I like happy endings *pouts*