Crowesque by nature ([identity profile] crowgirl13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] turps 2008-01-20 06:15 pm (UTC)

This is an absolutely lovely piece of writing. You've packed so much rich detail into each snippet - it makes each memory sparkle and feel absolutely real. The lush descriptions balance the sparse dialogue [which is awesome and seems very in character to me]. I love how you've sketched out the relationships here - how layered and complex Mikey and Gerard's relationship is, how the other relatioships spin out from that core - and I really love your Mikey.

In essence : Wow.

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