The last line is great! It make me realize that his wound started long before Jim tossed him out of the loft. You hint at it when he walks away, wondering what he'd done *this* time. *sniff*
The end is warm. I picture Jim inside, listening to Blair's anguish and taking action. So Jim.
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The last line is great! It make me realize that his wound started long before Jim tossed him out of the loft. You hint at it when he walks away, wondering what he'd done *this* time. *sniff*
The end is warm. I picture Jim inside, listening to Blair's anguish and taking action. So Jim.
*sniff* :)