Re: But wait! There's more! 2/2

Date: 2009-02-16 09:21 pm (UTC)
ext_312: Desolation Row!Gerard (Default)
*flails* This is so AWESOME!! I need this story to be finished so I can read all of it!! I want to know all of what has happened and where it's going to end and how everyone is doing and reacting and, well, EVERYTHING!!

Why he thinks that separating himself from his den and his Alpha was the right choice, Bob will never know.

That's Mikey, Bob is thinking about, right? (And now I'm wondering who Bob considers Mikey's Alpha to be. Gerard I presume, though I remember our discussion about Gerard's potential Alpha-ness :-)

Black fur, slender limbs, narrow muzzle and familiar hazel eyes...

Frank!!!

Frank had always had his back in the past. This just upped that feeling. Something fierce surged through him. Bob howled, uncaring about who might hear, and danced into the fight. His steps had never been so light. In him, under the snarls, hummed a song. It was one word. //pack pack pack//

This bit is wonderful. Bob's got a real pack mate!

Fianan

What a great name to use, it's got such history and so many connotations!

smoke/sweat/hotel soap/hair dye/laughter

Yes, that's Frank!

The whole bathroom scene is fantastic! Frank's despair and Bob's gruff sympathy and caretaking and how he can't let Frank break down completely. *squishes Bob and pets poor Frank*
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