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Mar. 14th, 2011 06:40 pmHappy birthday ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
withdiamonds You're one amazing lady, and I hope your day has been a fabulous one ♥
I feel bad about lumping this in with a birthday wish to Donna, but I was tagged byladyfoxxx for that first fanfic meme. Because obviously she hates me.
MEME: YOUR FIRST FIC!
Post your very first fanfiction. Don't edit anything out. Leave in all the bad spelling, terrible grammar and painful summary.
Tag five other people. Have fun!
I tag every writer out there. If I have to do this so do you!
I can't even believe that I'm about to post this. Or that it's still up there in the biggest The Sentinel archive for anyone to read. Also, for full disclosure. This is the first fic that made it online, my first actual story was for Star Trek Voyager, written on the back of printed out stories and if I remember rightly. Tom Paris being looked at lustily by Chakotay and complete with a nice line in bumpy-headed aliens. Thankfully that's nowhere to be found now.
Okay, my header is below. Everything bolded are my comments from now.
Make money from this, are you kidding? Because every story needs a cutsey disclaimer don't you know?
This was written as a birthday story for my best e-friend **** It was forcastalie but I'd used her real first name which she doesn't actually use online. Because I was just that clueless . It contains elements that I know she loves, as such this story now belongs to her. This is for you babe, enjoy it!
I also want to thank everyone who helped make this so much better, my alpha reader *****, and my betas at Sentinel Workshop, Sharakh, Starwatcher, Kate and Lyn, you all helped more than you could ever know, you all rock! Notice I needed 5 beta readers to even get it to this point. I wrote this thing and posted it to the Sentinel Workshop as a wall of text. I didn't even use paragraph breaks. If those e groups were still around I'd go and pluck the messages from that time, because I have memories of being told what even the most basic of terms meant, exposition, pacing, everything.
Ok this is basically a kink PWP. Please be aware that it contains scenes of knife and blood play, as well as what could be said is extreme dirty talk between Jim and Blair. I know this isn't to everyone's taste, so bail out now if any of these elements squick you. I'm not kidding the focus of the story is heavy on the blood and knife aspects. Please don't read then flame me, you were warned. Those warnings, oh bb!Terri, I want to pet you and your emphasis on heavy warnings on the head right now. Also, I was quite hostile with my warnings not to flame it seems.
( If you want to read the actual thing, go for it. Just be warned, it's long. I'll be hiding behind my hands and rocking in place and repeating, flame of longing over and over. )
Ahahaha. I just got to the end and was reminded that this was so early in my internet time that the email address I used was one that was set up by our first ISP and so has James' full name right there to be seen. I'm sorry James, I'm sure no one really thought you were out there writing blood and knife play slashfic.
withdiamonds You're one amazing lady, and I hope your day has been a fabulous one ♥I feel bad about lumping this in with a birthday wish to Donna, but I was tagged by
ladyfoxxx for that first fanfic meme. Because obviously she hates me.MEME: YOUR FIRST FIC!
Post your very first fanfiction. Don't edit anything out. Leave in all the bad spelling, terrible grammar and painful summary.
Tag five other people. Have fun!
I tag every writer out there. If I have to do this so do you!
I can't even believe that I'm about to post this. Or that it's still up there in the biggest The Sentinel archive for anyone to read. Also, for full disclosure. This is the first fic that made it online, my first actual story was for Star Trek Voyager, written on the back of printed out stories and if I remember rightly. Tom Paris being looked at lustily by Chakotay and complete with a nice line in bumpy-headed aliens. Thankfully that's nowhere to be found now.
Okay, my header is below. Everything bolded are my comments from now.
Make money from this, are you kidding? Because every story needs a cutsey disclaimer don't you know?
This was written as a birthday story for my best e-friend **** It was for
castalie but I'd used her real first name which she doesn't actually use online. Because I was just that clueless . It contains elements that I know she loves, as such this story now belongs to her. This is for you babe, enjoy it! I also want to thank everyone who helped make this so much better, my alpha reader *****, and my betas at Sentinel Workshop, Sharakh, Starwatcher, Kate and Lyn, you all helped more than you could ever know, you all rock! Notice I needed 5 beta readers to even get it to this point. I wrote this thing and posted it to the Sentinel Workshop as a wall of text. I didn't even use paragraph breaks. If those e groups were still around I'd go and pluck the messages from that time, because I have memories of being told what even the most basic of terms meant, exposition, pacing, everything.
Ok this is basically a kink PWP. Please be aware that it contains scenes of knife and blood play, as well as what could be said is extreme dirty talk between Jim and Blair. I know this isn't to everyone's taste, so bail out now if any of these elements squick you. I'm not kidding the focus of the story is heavy on the blood and knife aspects. Please don't read then flame me, you were warned. Those warnings, oh bb!Terri, I want to pet you and your emphasis on heavy warnings on the head right now. Also, I was quite hostile with my warnings not to flame it seems.
( If you want to read the actual thing, go for it. Just be warned, it's long. I'll be hiding behind my hands and rocking in place and repeating, flame of longing over and over. )Ahahaha. I just got to the end and was reminded that this was so early in my internet time that the email address I used was one that was set up by our first ISP and so has James' full name right there to be seen. I'm sorry James, I'm sure no one really thought you were out there writing blood and knife play slashfic.
