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[turps]

Finally edited my story, though in reality I didn't really edit, just added more angst. Poor Brennan submitted too fast for my liking so he was thrown in an underground cell that in reality is a cave containing a lake for a while. Imagine going through the door, and only having a tiny strip of land to rest on, the rest is freezing water. Which is pretty freaky for Bren as he's got a thing about water. Hey, if I shot electricity from my hands I would too!

It took me all day to do that one part, which is pretty sad. But I just wasn't in a writing mood.

I'm sending the thing to Jenny to beta tonight, all 70 pages of the thing...lucky Jenny