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Apr. 22nd, 2003 11:46 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
turpsReceived some nice comments about the Fastlane snippet that I posted, which I'm relieved about. Also some valid crit that I'm glad about too. I'm always grateful when someone sticks their neck out to say what needs changing. This is just my opinion but that's such a risky thing to do. The only time that I've offered gentle crit (even when it was asked for ) I never heard a thing back.
Anyway, apparently my tone and narrative shifted, which I agree with when I look for it. I need to see stuff like that myself, but I never notice until it's pointed out.
In real life I'm sitting surrounded by children. They're playing on the Playstation2 and damn but they're noisy lol. What's making it worse is they're playing a game that has something in it called 'love juice' and nasty slasher that I am I'm on the verge of losing it every time that they shout it -- and they're doing it a lot!
Anyway, apparently my tone and narrative shifted, which I agree with when I look for it. I need to see stuff like that myself, but I never notice until it's pointed out.
In real life I'm sitting surrounded by children. They're playing on the Playstation2 and damn but they're noisy lol. What's making it worse is they're playing a game that has something in it called 'love juice' and nasty slasher that I am I'm on the verge of losing it every time that they shout it -- and they're doing it a lot!
