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There's nothing like spending an afternoon with a friend talking about sex. Where you've done it, who with, how, sex toys the lot. It also means I've found another person who thinks sex on the beach just isn't worth it. Too much sand getting in too many places. I also found out today that I apparently had a blazing row with mam on Friday and chucked her out of my house after James punched her, which is just, yeah okay *shakes head* It's been a day of finding things out really. That my brother's partner had her breasts increased on Friday and Lea is a Justin hater. I found that one out when she was checking out my Sync swag. She did tell me all about the concert though which let her off slightly. Five Star were there! Of course Kayleigh didn't know them because she's an infant, but Lea and I did so we reminisced a bit. I also interrogated them about Darren.

Now a plea. Will anyone read the first part of the damn trickyfish? It's uploaded in my journal in a private post but I'll set up a filter if anyone offers. I don't want a beta, just someone who'll tell me if it actually works as I've lost all perspective and I don't want to carry on if it's rubbish. It's rough, only the beginning is done and will change once my magic beta gets her hands on it, but I need someone who tell me if I'm on crack, because just now I'm on the verge of calling it badfic and scrapping it.

My hand has been held and I'm feeling a lot happier now :)

Date: 2004-08-30 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myorangecrush.livejournal.com
I can return the favour if you want?

Date: 2004-08-30 10:55 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (pete close up equanimousicons)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Wonderful! Thank you.

Like I said, I don't need a beta, I'll get that done when it's finished, just someone who'll say if it works or not.

The links here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1). It should work if I set my filer up right.

Just remember it's supposed to be cliched.

Date: 2004-08-30 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chrismm.livejournal.com
I'm at work for another six or so hours, but if you haven't got someone by then, I'd be glad to read it. I suspect, based on how much I like all your other stories, that's it's not rubbish at all. *grins*

Date: 2004-08-30 10:58 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (Mikey/Bob ( tragic_icons))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I'm repeating myself but what I'm after is an opinion really. Because of the cliche element I feel like I'm writing badfic and it's not sitting well at the moment.

Link is here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1).

Thanks again :)

Date: 2004-08-30 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ssecca01.livejournal.com
I'll read it!

Date: 2004-08-30 10:59 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (Default)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Thanks for offering!

Jusr remember it's supposed to be cliched. I'm telling everyone that because I keep thinking I'm writing badfic.

Link is here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1).

Thanks again :)

Date: 2004-08-30 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bettina_/
It also means I've found another person who thinks sex on the beach just isn't worth it.

I never had sex on the beach, but I can't imagine it's all that comfortable with all the sand everywhere *shudder*. But you know, in fantasy it's good :-).

I wanted to volunteer, but I see you already have quite a few takers to read your story.

Date: 2004-08-30 11:11 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (chris purple.)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
You're in. You're one of my best commenters and I know you'll give an honest opinion :)

Link is here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1) But I have to give you the warning I'm giving everyone. It's supposed to be cliched *g*

In fantasy sex on the beach is wonderful, in reality, not so much ;)

Date: 2004-08-30 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] call-me-loca.livejournal.com
I'll read it, if the offer is still open.

Date: 2004-08-30 11:08 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (Bob is a star (samelthecamel))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Sure it is. The more people who tell me I'm writing badcrack the better ;)

The link is here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1). Just give me a few minutes to add you to the filter.

Also, remember it's supposed to be cliched *g*

Date: 2004-08-30 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaciesplace.livejournal.com
New Terri fic? I'd be happy, make that more than happy, to read it, but I'm often told I have lousy taste. I know what I like and what I don't like, but my tastes are very hit and miss with the masses *sigh*.

Date: 2004-08-30 11:38 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (trickyfish (krabbypatty))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Don't put yourself down like that!

You've never been anything but kind with me and my work even though I don't tend to write what you like.

Link is here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1) and I'd love your opinion.

Date: 2004-08-30 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaciesplace.livejournal.com
The link doesn't like me! :(

Date: 2004-08-30 12:34 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (atlantis trickyfish)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I'm an idiot and forgot to put you on the filter!

Sorry :(

It should work now.

Date: 2004-08-30 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaciesplace.livejournal.com
though I don't tend to write what you like.

Oh stop! I do like what you write, even the non-AUs. It doesn't bother me to read other people's non-AUs, it just rubs me the wrong way to write them. I've tried, but can't get a word out. If I enjoy an author's AUs, I'll generally enjoy their non-AUs as well. If I didn't enjoy any non-AUs, I wouldn't waste my time reading them. You know how stubborn I can be! *grin*

Date: 2004-08-30 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceci2176.livejournal.com
I also found out today that I apparently had a blazing row with mam on Friday and chucked her out of my house after James punched her, which is just, yeah okay *shakes head*
How nice that someone let you know! [/sarcasm]

I'm on the verge of calling it badfic and scrapping it.
I sincerely doubt it's badfic. Well, unless there are no owies in it and you go by my standards and call all stories that don't contain owies badfic. ;-)

Date: 2004-08-30 03:12 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (trickc day (jchalo))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
It was Kayleigh that told me after mam phoned on Friday on told her that. Honestly, the lies that woman tells astound me.

LOL. I've been convinced it's not badfic, and you'll be pleased to know there's a lot of oowies. Lets see, at the moment Chris has one broken wrist and a sliced arm. Joey we're not sure of. JC is unconscious and Justin was unconscious but is now searching for Lance who's missing. They're all banged up, poor things.

Date: 2004-08-30 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceci2176.livejournal.com
Honestly, the lies that woman tells astound me.
As a person who has a tendency to embellish the truth from time to time, I do feel sorry for others who lie, because it's almost always about making yourself appear in a better light and 'holier than thou'. Scary stuff, like poison.

I've been convinced it's not badfic
Well, d'oh. ;-)

you'll be pleased to know there's a lot of oowies.
SQUEE! :-D

Lets see, at the moment Chris has one broken wrist and a sliced arm. Joey we're not sure of. JC is unconscious and Justin was unconscious but is now searching for Lance who's missing. They're all banged up, poor things.
*eg* Joey probably hit his head on something and lost his memory...and Lance's got a broken nose. *eg*

Date: 2004-08-31 01:40 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (chris purple.)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I'm so tempted to use that broken nose thing. It's just perfect!

You're a genius :D

Date: 2004-08-31 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceci2176.livejournal.com
I'm so tempted to use that broken nose thing. It's just perfect!
Uh-huh. *eg*

You're a genius :D
Are you feeling all right? Well, I guess a compliment is a compliment, even if it comes from a delirious woman. ;-รพ

Date: 2004-08-30 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ninjetti75.livejournal.com
*GLARES*

And why on Earth am I not on this filter?

I apologize for whatever it was I did, really!! ;P

Date: 2004-08-30 03:01 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (pete close up equanimousicons)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I've put you on if you still want to see. Not that I'm caving in to your glare or anything ;)

Link is here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/turps33/295170.html#cutid1)

Date: 2004-08-30 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lincolnkw.livejournal.com
Oh yeah, sex on the beach not fun. At. All. Nor in the snow.

Date: 2004-08-31 01:33 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (atlantis trickyfish)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I've never tried in the snow, but I imagine it wouldn't be fun. *shivers*
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