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turpsFor Eva, who made me do this with her comments even though I suck at writing sex. Hee, I said suck. Probably makes no sense, but hell, it's for fun and done for distraction as I thought over a phone call I just got.
JC has a mental list of fantasies, old favourites that he imagines over and over until every detail is perfect. Lying in his bunk, sheets pushed aside, he leaves behind the harsh realities of touring in a small bus and enters a world where the men are perfect and eager to do anything he needs.
As he runs his hand down his stomach, stroking and caressing his own skin he imagines he’s lying on slippery silk sheets. When he touches his own cock, teasing with a feather light touch before changing to hard strokes, he imagines it’s Jay’s hand. Perfect Jay with the perfect teeth and perfect body.
When he pulls up his legs, twisting and groping for the hand lotion, JC lets his imagination fly as he slowly fucks himself. One teasing finger at first, then two as he spreads his legs wider, twisting his hips in a slow rhythm, driving himself deeper until he’s second knuckle deep and gasping as he tries to muffle his moans.
When he comes it’s with Jay’s name on his lips and JC lies limp on his bunk, exhausted but happy as he returns to the real world and leaves the fantasy behind.
~*~*~*~*~
Chris was never on the list of fantasies. He isn’t blond or built, and he’s mean on occasions, slicing into tender emotions with his razor sharp tongue. He’s too real for a fantasy world, all hard lines, a whirlwind of energy that would never fit into the soft focused world of JC’s imagination.
Which is good; as JC doesn’t want him there.
Chris is in the here and now. Lying propped on one elbow in bed, looking up with dark eyes as he takes JC’s cock in his mouth, tonguing it like a pro as his slick fingers probe deep. He’s unrelenting as he sucks and thrusts his fingers in a punishing and perfect rhythm that leaves JC moaning and shaking in pleasure, climax seconds away.
Chris belongs in the real world; where his stubble leaves JC’s inner thighs rubbed raw and sore, and his kisses taste of dinner or alcohol or come. He hogs the blankets and farts in bed. Sleeps in his socks at times, complaining of cold and snores when he’s lying on his back.
He can be pissy and sarcastic, taking a joke too far and lashing out at the wrong people. But he’s also the man JC loves, the one better than any fantasy, and that makes him perfect.
JC has a mental list of fantasies, old favourites that he imagines over and over until every detail is perfect. Lying in his bunk, sheets pushed aside, he leaves behind the harsh realities of touring in a small bus and enters a world where the men are perfect and eager to do anything he needs.
As he runs his hand down his stomach, stroking and caressing his own skin he imagines he’s lying on slippery silk sheets. When he touches his own cock, teasing with a feather light touch before changing to hard strokes, he imagines it’s Jay’s hand. Perfect Jay with the perfect teeth and perfect body.
When he pulls up his legs, twisting and groping for the hand lotion, JC lets his imagination fly as he slowly fucks himself. One teasing finger at first, then two as he spreads his legs wider, twisting his hips in a slow rhythm, driving himself deeper until he’s second knuckle deep and gasping as he tries to muffle his moans.
When he comes it’s with Jay’s name on his lips and JC lies limp on his bunk, exhausted but happy as he returns to the real world and leaves the fantasy behind.
~*~*~*~*~
Chris was never on the list of fantasies. He isn’t blond or built, and he’s mean on occasions, slicing into tender emotions with his razor sharp tongue. He’s too real for a fantasy world, all hard lines, a whirlwind of energy that would never fit into the soft focused world of JC’s imagination.
Which is good; as JC doesn’t want him there.
Chris is in the here and now. Lying propped on one elbow in bed, looking up with dark eyes as he takes JC’s cock in his mouth, tonguing it like a pro as his slick fingers probe deep. He’s unrelenting as he sucks and thrusts his fingers in a punishing and perfect rhythm that leaves JC moaning and shaking in pleasure, climax seconds away.
Chris belongs in the real world; where his stubble leaves JC’s inner thighs rubbed raw and sore, and his kisses taste of dinner or alcohol or come. He hogs the blankets and farts in bed. Sleeps in his socks at times, complaining of cold and snores when he’s lying on his back.
He can be pissy and sarcastic, taking a joke too far and lashing out at the wrong people. But he’s also the man JC loves, the one better than any fantasy, and that makes him perfect.
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Date: 2004-09-09 09:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 09:22 am (UTC)I love writing and thinking of sex scenes but writing them is a different story!
Also. Your icon is gorgeous!
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Date: 2004-09-14 07:13 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 09:26 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 11:14 am (UTC)I wish more people could separate fantasy and reality, sadly it seems it's an overlap for a lot of people.
But I'm straying from my point, which is, thanks for the comment :)
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Date: 2004-09-09 09:26 am (UTC)Oh Terri, that was PERFECT!! Perfect and HOT. What do you mean, you can't write sex? I loved that so much; you captured the essence of TrickC right there, man.
I can't wait for my birthday again, so I can elicit another fic out of you!! :)
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:21 am (UTC)I'm glad you liked it :)
I honestly don't think I can write sex very well so I'm thrilled you thought it was hot.
LOL. I'll write you something sooner than your birthday if I ever have any free time. Promise.
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Date: 2004-09-09 09:32 am (UTC)Really nice. :)
you said, and I quote, "I suck." ahahahahahaha!
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:23 am (UTC)I did? I do! ;)
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Date: 2004-09-09 09:35 am (UTC)TRICKC!!!!!!!!!!!
I HAVE NO TRICKC ICONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:24 am (UTC)YOU MUST HAVE SOME TRICKC ICONS!!!!!!!!!!!!
50 OF THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2004-09-09 12:40 pm (UTC)*smooch* just because you're you.
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Date: 2004-09-09 12:52 pm (UTC)*smooches back*
You, sweetheart, are wonderful.
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Date: 2004-09-09 01:50 pm (UTC)right backatcha. :D
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Date: 2004-09-09 09:37 am (UTC)You write so well, you always manage to get depth and insight into your fic, including your porn *g*
Preeetty, and wonderfully porny *g*
**snuggles**
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:27 am (UTC)Thank you :D
I still don't think I'm good at writing porn but I'm glad people enjoyed it :) Though who could fail to like the idea of JC finger fucking himself?
*snuggles with you*
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:35 am (UTC)You so rule at writing porn, oh yes. I suck at writing porn, and frankly, anyone who doesn't like the idea of JC finger fucking himself is insane and doesn't deserve to be acknowledged lol
**snuggles some more**
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Date: 2004-09-09 12:16 pm (UTC)Damn. Now my brain has short circuited.
You write great porn, I love your kilt fic and you wrote me Christmas porn, even though I was the only one to ask for it as I'm shameless *g*
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Date: 2004-09-09 01:17 pm (UTC)lol you were shameless, but somehow, Charls asking for Ronan/Stephen was worse *g* (plus, I wouldn't hav you any other way, oh no. 'cause who else would I have to be shameless with?)
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Date: 2004-09-09 10:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 11:42 am (UTC)There's a huge separation between fantasy and reality, it's just a shame that some people don't see that. Also, yeah, reality is always better.
I'm glad you enjoyed :D
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Date: 2004-09-09 10:16 am (UTC)You so do NOT suck *pauses and giggles* at writing sex!
I love this! And I love you! *squeezes you tight*
bad phonecall? *hugs*
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:46 am (UTC)You started it all with your comments and it sort of evolved from there. Because I really do see TrickC as being based on love, at least the way that I see them.
I love you too! *squeezes you back*
Phonecall explained now
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Date: 2004-09-09 10:46 am (UTC)And the Chris you described? I imagine that's him to a T. LOL.
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:50 am (UTC)I imagine Chris does have some rough edges, like most men ;)
*hugs you back* Not bad as such, just something to think on.
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Date: 2004-09-09 11:52 am (UTC)Anyway, it's wonderful, I like that JC differentiates between fantasy and reality. I love it, Chris is his reality :-). I like that.
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Date: 2004-09-09 12:19 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!
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Date: 2004-09-09 12:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 12:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 01:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-09 01:03 pm (UTC)*falls on the floor and whimpers*
Who told you that you can't write sex? That was just nummy. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I loves it. Loves it lots and lots and lots.
btw...um... boxes.. lobsters... sexonatable... any of this ring a bell? *bats eyes innocently*
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Date: 2004-09-09 02:33 pm (UTC)Terri-Luv, what's this rubbish about you not being able to write porn?
'Cause my AC is on, and it's STILL *hot* in here...
*waggles eyebrows*
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Date: 2004-09-09 02:35 pm (UTC)*happy sigh* So soft, and gentle, and sweet, and just perfect. :)
}:)
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Date: 2004-09-09 02:53 pm (UTC)*smooch* I love this. Really. I lub it. *huggles ficlet*
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Date: 2004-09-09 06:39 pm (UTC)You have killed me dead with the hotness of this. Just...fabulous imagery and TrickC goodness. Yum. *drool*
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Date: 2004-09-14 09:34 am (UTC)I'm thrilled you thought it was hot :D
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Date: 2004-09-14 11:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-15 07:50 am (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed.
Thank you!