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Aug. 23rd, 2003 09:21 pmForgot to mention. When I was cleaning my bedroom I found a my stash of Poltergeist the Legacy slash stories that I printed when I first came online. What's funny is what's on the back of one, the first fanfic I ever tried. This was years before I tried for real, and no wonder I gave up.
It's Voyager, and in the first page I have a Marty Sue *g* I only found one page which is probably just as well. I'll have to type it up then when I think I'm not improving at writing I can just look at that. But yes, the first page has Chakotay and Janeway in negotiation with this alien, and he's over 7 foot tall with ebony hair. Yes ebony, no black in Marty Sue land *g* Huge eyes, tall, what was I thinking?
I think I'm going to upload it to FFNet and say I'll do no more unless I get 5 positive reviews. I'll need a name too, how about Voyagerchickadee?
Hee, what a blast from the past.
It's Voyager, and in the first page I have a Marty Sue *g* I only found one page which is probably just as well. I'll have to type it up then when I think I'm not improving at writing I can just look at that. But yes, the first page has Chakotay and Janeway in negotiation with this alien, and he's over 7 foot tall with ebony hair. Yes ebony, no black in Marty Sue land *g* Huge eyes, tall, what was I thinking?
I think I'm going to upload it to FFNet and say I'll do no more unless I get 5 positive reviews. I'll need a name too, how about Voyagerchickadee?
Hee, what a blast from the past.
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Date: 2003-08-23 02:09 pm (UTC)yeah, voyagerchickadee would be very ffnety indeed - but would you mind if I pretended I didn't know you under that identity? That might be too much for my brain to take (Terri on ffnet, another sign of Apocalypse?)
ps: there was this show on the Saturday Night Live and every time the... let's say 'woman' got emotional, she would say 'I'm getting a little verklempft' - so there, now you know my terrible secret lol
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Date: 2003-08-23 02:23 pm (UTC)Fucking ouch!! I don't think I'll ever recover! *still laughing*
*takes a deep breathe* *pulls herself together* Know what? From an anthropological point of view... this would be just *perfect*! I mean, I would *love* to see the bf Voyagerchickadee could have!! Oh God, I'm laughing again, and I can't stop! The hacks will hear me, that's for sure! I have to shut up, and go back now!! OMG, I hear them coming up the stairs!! Gotta go!
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Date: 2003-08-24 02:50 am (UTC)*Aw, pats Mouse where she fell, then laughs at her*
I wouldn't mind seeing what feedback I get too *g*
OMG yr stry is gr8/ Plz write more!!!!111
I'd make sure I threaten not to do more unless I get all positive reviews. I'm so tempted *g*
Bad Mouse!
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Date: 2003-08-24 02:55 am (UTC)Me devious, me happy.
Are you gonna do it? This would be sooooooo bad! So mean! Are you gonna do it? lol
Just imagine the feedbacks --the one you chose was just perfect btw, it had me lol still now! lol-- *and* the possibility to belong to one of those lj where people look for Mary Sue fics. Talk about an honor! lol
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Date: 2003-08-23 03:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-08-24 02:37 am (UTC)Lol, great minds must think alike but I'm thinking of doing just that. Watch out for it later *g*
I suspect all first stories are bad. The difference in writers is the good ones don't show anything until they improve, the bad post at FFNet ;)