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:D :D

I was biting my tongue and not pointing out how you were cruising along nicely with the porn - already you've done better than I generally manage! I have faith that you can keep it up! [Heh heh.]

I think it would be AWESOME to set the whole thing from Mikey's POV. That way it keeps a certain level of detachment that's 1) easier to write and 2) super hot. [Bear witness to *my* kinks. I dig a bit of distance - voyeurism and phone sex both sharpen the heat, IMO.] And I love that you end with cuddling! All threesome-shaped orgy things should end in cuddling.