You always describe the pain very vividly in your stories, to the point where I try not to move because I'm afraid it will hurt me. That's intense.
Also, I was so worried about Brendon in the beginning. He's so naive and unsuspecting, it made me heart hurt to think what could happen to him, to all of them really.
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Date: 2009-12-15 06:12 am (UTC)You always describe the pain very vividly in your stories, to the point where I try not to move because I'm afraid it will hurt me. That's intense.
Also, I was so worried about Brendon in the beginning. He's so naive and unsuspecting, it made me heart hurt to think what could happen to him, to all of them really.
Really great job, I loved it.