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Jul. 12th, 2003 09:32 amWell The End2 wasn't as finished as I thought...sigh. Reading through it I found a continuity problem that smacked you in the face when you read the story. So I spent a while fixing it, I'm going to have another read now, just to make sure. Then it's off to the beta's.
I had to leave a big section out as there was going to be too much information to take in for one chapter. That means that I can leave going to the Ellison home to the next one.
I've a feeling that it'll need more adding, but Mouse'll tell me that lol.
In RL it's still been damn hot! It was Corey's sport's day on Thursday. He came last in most races, mainly because he wouldn't cheat *g* Most of the kids can't use a skipping rope, so they'd skip a while then run. Corey kept trying to skip, moving about one step forward with each turn. He got a big cheer when he did finish lol.
Yesterday we had a cleaning blitz on the house, tidying upstairs and down. We also met Kayleigh for dinner again from work. She's so much happier now, she's starting to fit in and like working there. She told us about one of the mechanics, very buff apparently who'd rolled his overalls down and was wearing a white crop top underneath. He was hot and drinking a cold cola, so what does he do? Tips it over his head, she said it was a *very* nice sight, him all wet. Have to admit all I could think about is how sticky he would be.
Oh, I got a parcel from Jenny too! Much Victor prettiness, two posters for my wall, a MX subway banner and three copies of prints by an artist who does gay themes. Man, I can't think of his name, it's slipped from my head. They're good though, very inspiring ;) The only thing is the parcel was sent months ago, we thought it had been lost so Jenny bought and sent more of the same. God knows where the parcel's been. The only thing that was missing was some shoes for my Jesse doll... Shut up, I can have dolls if I want *g*... But yes, much Victor prettiness that I need to get on the wall.
Better go and check that story, then I'm on mail and comment catch up *again* One day I'll have a clear in-box...yeah right lol
I had to leave a big section out as there was going to be too much information to take in for one chapter. That means that I can leave going to the Ellison home to the next one.
I've a feeling that it'll need more adding, but Mouse'll tell me that lol.
In RL it's still been damn hot! It was Corey's sport's day on Thursday. He came last in most races, mainly because he wouldn't cheat *g* Most of the kids can't use a skipping rope, so they'd skip a while then run. Corey kept trying to skip, moving about one step forward with each turn. He got a big cheer when he did finish lol.
Yesterday we had a cleaning blitz on the house, tidying upstairs and down. We also met Kayleigh for dinner again from work. She's so much happier now, she's starting to fit in and like working there. She told us about one of the mechanics, very buff apparently who'd rolled his overalls down and was wearing a white crop top underneath. He was hot and drinking a cold cola, so what does he do? Tips it over his head, she said it was a *very* nice sight, him all wet. Have to admit all I could think about is how sticky he would be.
Oh, I got a parcel from Jenny too! Much Victor prettiness, two posters for my wall, a MX subway banner and three copies of prints by an artist who does gay themes. Man, I can't think of his name, it's slipped from my head. They're good though, very inspiring ;) The only thing is the parcel was sent months ago, we thought it had been lost so Jenny bought and sent more of the same. God knows where the parcel's been. The only thing that was missing was some shoes for my Jesse doll... Shut up, I can have dolls if I want *g*... But yes, much Victor prettiness that I need to get on the wall.
Better go and check that story, then I'm on mail and comment catch up *again* One day I'll have a clear in-box...yeah right lol