Date: 2005-07-21 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ninjetti75.livejournal.com
Um, some needed commas, one "have" that shoulda been "has" (unless that's some wonky British thing I don't get), proper punctuation of quote-within-a-quote... ..absolutely NOTHING big; I'm just anal and attempting to become a professional author, so I automatically critique the hell out of literally everything I read, just can't turn it off.
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