It's an awesome song. I may have listened 178992716290 a few times since I downloaded it.
Pronouns can trip stories up so easily. If you're writing m/m you really need to watch you don't end up with too many 'he's' or the story gets impossible to follow.
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Date: 2006-03-28 03:15 pm (UTC)178992716290a few times since I downloaded it.Pronouns can trip stories up so easily. If you're writing m/m you really need to watch you don't end up with too many 'he's' or the story gets impossible to follow.