turps: (Jon ( themoononastick))
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I really like the songs that Jon put out last night. But I must protest his timing. I was all geared up to write gsf -- in which by geared up I mean I was being cheered on via twitter and various people making me laugh -- and then Jon posted those songs. Songs that are made for swaying in your seat and not writing porn.

Bah to you Jon Walker! However I'll forgive him as I really do like the songs. He wrote about growing a beard. I just. *hands*

So I'm going to write that scene now. Yes I am.

Oh god

ETA: 7 hours later and I'm done with that scene. Everyone fear my fail!porn!

Date: 2011-01-07 02:21 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Bob blue)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
But he wrote about growing a beard. A beard!

I am! Words from minutes ago.


“Jesus,” Bob says on an out-breath and Frank knows how he feels, his own imagination racing as Mikey keeps talking, almost directly in Gerard’s ear.

“You know you want to draw that, Bob’s spine arching and Frank’s mouth, you want to capture his whimpers and put them on the page, when Bob first fucks him open and then after, when he’s fucked out and exhausted.”


I'm now battling my badfic side which has the urge to add something about dripping come, and how it would be aesthetically pleasing.

You are going to be a writing supahstar this weekend. I can feel it.

Date: 2011-01-07 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crowgirl13.livejournal.com
I'm gleefacing here, even with the threat of badfic pr0n.

Date: 2011-01-07 04:35 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Bob blue)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
You'll be relived to know that the badfic porn has been avoided.

After a few hours of finger fucking, insults, and battling my prudish fingers Bob is about to fuck Frank. With no dripping come in sight.

To which I say, about fucking time.

Date: 2011-01-07 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crowgirl13.livejournal.com
VICTORY IS YOURS!\o/

Go you!
Go Bob!
[And I really mean the last - go like bunnies, Bob. ;D]

Date: 2011-01-07 07:38 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Bob/Mikey)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Victory is mine!

I wrote actual penetrative sex. Now, whether it's good penetrative sex is debatable, but the words are there *g*

Date: 2011-01-07 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crowgirl13.livejournal.com
Oh man, I'm so impressed. That stuff's difficult to write! I'm still fighting to get past handjobs and desperate alley sexing. I'm sure that your actual penetrative sex is FAR better written than you think. And you have excellent betas would I'm sure will help you.

Date: 2011-01-07 08:24 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Default)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I may be a little scared to read and find out.

But you're right, L will do her usual amazing job and sort it out in beta.

You're also right about that stuff being difficult. I'm never going to do it again that's for sure.

And now I've just made myself all sniffly making Bob run out on them due to commitment issues. Damn you Bryar, you pig-headed idiot!

Four scenes to go. I think I may actually do this.

How are you? I'm babbling on about myself here.

Date: 2011-01-07 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crowgirl13.livejournal.com
Don't be scared! I'm 100% positive that it will be better than you currently think it is. And um...hee, I'd think you'd know to never say never when it comes to writing. :D

OH NO!!!! BOB! What are you doing??????
[Best fix it quickly, Terri. The last thing those boys need is time to stew in their own juices.]

OF COURSE you're going to to do it! And it will be AWESOME when done. *\o/*

I'm pretty good. Stressed about lack of job and money issues, adjusting to having a housemate and doing my best to ignore some internal angst. I'm giving my writing binder the eye - I miss words and desperately want to finish and post some of the stuff I was working on in November.

Date: 2011-01-07 11:02 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (imagination (wizzicons))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
While I know you're right about that never say never thing, I've vowed my next 7293782 stories will feature hand holding and fade to black.

I've sort of fixed it. In that Patrick's yelled at him and called him a moron. Something he's actually done a lot in this story *g*

Two scenes to go now! Of course I'll be told to add about five more, but that first draft is so close to done I can taste it.

Ack, that doesn't sound good. Is there anything I can help with? You know I'm always around to listen. Or cheer on your words, which are always awesome and shiny things.

Date: 2011-01-07 11:26 pm (UTC)
themoononastick: refract ([bandom] frank)
From: [personal profile] themoononastick
Of course I'll be told to add about five more

Just so you know, there's at least one scene I am going to insist you add. Sorry!?!

Date: 2011-01-07 11:29 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Frank (spuzz))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
As long as it doesn't involve sex I'll add anything you want <3

Oh, and now your icon is making me try and guess what it is.

Date: 2011-01-07 11:35 pm (UTC)
themoononastick: refract ([bandom] gerard - bright lights)
From: [personal profile] themoononastick
So you mean you won't add a scene where they meet up with Pete and have an orgy in a pool? Dammit >:(

I may possibly be using my icons as subtle clues. Or I may just be using my icons because they're pretty...

Date: 2011-01-07 11:52 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Gerard mask)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
If anyone would have a pool in the desert it would be Pete. and now I'm laughing again at the mental image of wet band boys and them fussing over their hair. Also, I fear if Gerard swam around he's leave a red cloud behind him.

Your icons are very pretty. Yes.

Date: 2011-01-08 12:23 am (UTC)
themoononastick: refract ([killjoys] gerard)
From: [personal profile] themoononastick
Ha! If Gerard joined in the pool orgy it would be the equivalent of putting one red sock in a white's wash. Everyone would end up dyed slightly pink :D

Date: 2011-01-09 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crowgirl13.livejournal.com
I've vowed my next 7293782 stories will feature hand holding and fade to black.

But you've been doing so well! Every time I see porn tickling into your stories I cheer, jsyk.

Hee. Good job, Patrick. That's the sort of friend everyone needs, one that points you back to the gsf for your own good. ;D

I saw that you finished the first draft! WOO HOOOOOOO!!!!
*dances a victory dance*

Eh, it's not good but it's not bad. If I can marshal my thoughts on things, I'll shoot you an email. Thank you for the offer regardless. Word-wise, otoh, I have a certain grumpy werewolf stuck in the desert that I could use some feedback on, if you're game. :D?

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