This is such a nice story! Great Bob characterisation and his and Patrick's friendship were so sweet in all its mutual grumpiness :-) I really like how you wrote the Killjoys and the way they're opening up to Bob, and I love the glimpses we get into how other people are living in the zones. But the attack on the family camp was completely heartbreaking. I'd tears in my eyes while I read that!
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Date: 2011-01-23 04:42 pm (UTC)