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Jun. 23rd, 2005 12:33 pmAJ is steel over liquid, harsh lines inked into soft skin, a life-story in ink that creeps across his body with time. Cigarette held between black tipped fingers, jewellery glinting cold in the dim lights, he prowls the room as if looking for prey.
Constantly moving, he slips past hands that reach for him, twisting and weaving with a dance that clearly says keep away. Then stands on the balcony, pressed against the railings, high above the writhing mass of dancers below and watches; body motionless and poised to strike.
Within seconds, his target is in sight. A riot of colour and sweat damp hair as he dances in the crowd. Head back and laughing as the lights flare and bathe him in gold. AJ takes a long drag on his cigarette then drops it to the sticky floor, grinding it under his heel. It’s time.
Bodies move against him when he reaches the dance-floor, pulling him in with greedy hands that he ignores. Wiping away sweat with an impatient swipe of his arm he gets closer, intent on nothing but his prey.
Closer still he reaches out a hand, black nails against white cotton, feeling the heat against his palm, then pounces, wrapping his arms around a sweat-damp body and pulling close.
JC laughs, unsurprised, and turns in his embrace until they’re chest to chest, kissing with dry lips as they sway. Dancing to their own beat, silky movements and loving touches as AJ celebrates catching his man yet again.
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Date: 2005-06-23 11:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-06-23 11:45 am (UTC)So pretty! This:
AJ is steel over liquid, harsh lines inked into soft skin, a life-story in ink that creeps across his body with time. Cigarette held between black tipped fingers, jewellery glinting cold in the dim lights, he prowls the room as if looking for prey.
perfect! Descriptive language like I try to write but never quite manage. Love this.
**smooches you**
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Date: 2005-06-23 11:46 am (UTC)JM seems to think I don't talk about AJ enough which is just not true!
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Okay, I suppose it is but still *g*
Thank you!
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Date: 2005-06-23 11:49 am (UTC)And you write just perfectly wonderfully so none of that!
Thank you!
How you doing, came down off your JB high yet?
*smooches with you*
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Date: 2005-06-23 12:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-06-23 12:13 pm (UTC)This'll show her, eh?
It better, saying I never mention AJ. HA!
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Date: 2005-06-23 12:51 pm (UTC)I do okay *g* but that was just lovely! Reminds me of a little nameless BSB thing I did, but honestly, that was perfect *g*
Never! Never will I come down off my JB high! (did I mention I'm going to the London Film & Comic Con on Saturday with the express intention of seeing him? Bwah.)
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Date: 2005-06-23 02:33 pm (UTC)Meep.
Where do I even start? Oh lord, this encapsulates everything I love about the Letterboys
and who says you're not going to mention them here again?!.JC laughs, unsurprised, and turns in his embrace until they’re chest to chest, kissing with dry lips as they sway. Dancing to their own beat, silky movements and loving touches as AJ celebrates catching his man yet again.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
I think I have to go lie down now. Guh.
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Date: 2005-06-23 04:13 pm (UTC)Look at me not mentioning trickc because I'm nice like that ;)
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Date: 2005-06-23 05:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-06-23 05:49 pm (UTC)Thanks :)
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Date: 2005-06-23 10:11 pm (UTC)I love the contrast between AJ - pretty much everything about him, the inked skin, black nailpolish, how he tells the greedy hands to stay away - and JC writhing in white cotton on the dancefloor. Yet they're similar as well, all sleek grace.
as AJ celebrates catching his man yet again.
I love that part; it dilutes the intensity and adds a note of silliness that you know both boys possess.
Eeeeeeee! Write more, anytime you'd like! :D
}:)
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Date: 2005-06-27 01:41 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked this, short that it was :)
I don't know if I'll write more but I have to admit, they do make a pretty picture together ;)
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Date: 2005-06-27 02:52 pm (UTC)}:)