turps

I'm after ~~masochists~~ volunteers that are willing to help me with a story. I've signed for

xoverau's Joey challenge and sort of know what I'm doing but I want someone to bounce ideas off as my usual idea bouncer is staying stubbornly immune to the sparkly side. *glares at Mouse*

The thing is I'm basing the story on one I've already wrote, Fear Based Responses which is here.

The challenge story is going to be the follow up to that, but I'm also thinking about re-writing that first story and making it into part of the bigger one. I asked Nic and she said the story would have to be substantially added to or changed which I think is only right.

Now I like the story, I think I could write it better now but I don't know if I'm good enough to manipulate it and add more so it reads like a new story which is why I'm going help!

I know the story could be better and I can take crit, so don't be afraid of that. But now I shut up before I scare everyone away *g*

Also, I said that I only had one person's ficlets to do. I forgot about my dear sis

castalie who set me a fiendish one!