New Story: Wilt (Choey)

[turps]

I'm posting my story for the 1000 Word Challenge.

Thanks go to ephemera_pop who was there at every step. Telling me the first story I wrote just didn't cut it, then helped me with this one too, all the while writing her own. Also, joshysleo and msktrnanny who helped weed out any Briticisms that had crept in there. Any mistakes remaining are mine and mine alone.

Choey. Wilt

Comments

[withdiamonds.livejournal.com]

Wow, what a great job. Your descriptions are amazing, and I can picture the bar so clearly. I love Joey's weariness, and Chris's anger, and how they are with each other. I hope when they talk that they work everything out and Joey feels better.

[withdiamonds.livejournal.com]

Also, because I posted too soon, how much fun is seeing all the different ideas these pictures inspire. Wilt is perfect for yours.

[ravenbat.livejournal.com]

I still like this as much as when I first read it. :)

*flies off to type some more*

[tara]

Wow, the description's gorgeous in this, hun :) Lovely.

[paperdollkisses.livejournal.com]

Sweet Joey angst! I love Joey angst.

[luxshine.livejournal.com]

That was really sweet. I could *see* Chris's worry and Joey's anger, and...
Wow.
Thank you so much for sharing

[http://users.livejournal.com/_bettina_/]

This was interesting and I liked it. :-)