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I've got two scenes left to finish my [livejournal.com profile] rpf_big_bang story. For one glorious moment I thought it was one, but had forgotten that right in the middle I have *insert such and such a scene here* You know I've been sitting here wondering if that scene has to be included. Maybe people won't notice that something that's referenced heavily earlier on doesn't actually happen? But sadly I know that's not the case. Bah.

Which means of course that soon I need such things as a title and summary to entice artists to my story. I feel I need to improve on 'well Ray has a gardening firm and there is angst and sadness and laughter and lawn stripes and lots of swearing and food and dragon bird baths and Frank in lady bug jeans and a long h/c scene and did I mention lawn stripes?'

At least I know the title has to be related to rainbows in some way. I think I'll call it 'George, Bungle and Zippy'. Then most people will read and go, the hell? Also, what's weird is posting doesn't actually start until well into October. I'm going to have so much time to edit this. Which I'm sure my betas will be happy about, but I'm not used to sitting on a story for so long.

Then it's on to the [livejournal.com profile] bandom_hc story, with maybe a brief stop to write another short ffor [livejournal.com profile] cliche_bingo. I'm in a Mikey/Pete place right now, or some Panic maybe. I want to try my hand at Ryan/Jon.

I've found out that hotspot shield means I can use hulu, which is very cool. Tomorrow I plan on watching the episodes of K-Ville I missed before I found it on Sky. Tonight it's the double episode ender of The Mentalist. I'm going to miss that show. Also, did I pick it up right that new Project Runway starts tonight in the US? If so, it's about time!

I had delicious sweet and sour quorn pieces for tea, now I'm very full and quite content after a long shower, sitting with the window open watching the heavy rain.

Date: 2009-08-20 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] runzu.livejournal.com
You can do it!!! *cheers*

I'm going home now. Yay! I'm going to read, play my psx emulator, make icons, and be happy. :)

*hands you a cookie*

Date: 2009-08-20 08:12 pm (UTC)
turlough: castle on mountain top in winter, Burg Hohenzollern (lost my fear of falling)
From: [personal profile] turlough
I would probably notice it, I tend to be obnoxiously observant about things like that ;-) (Like continuity errors, they always seem positively GLARING to me but I've understood that most people don't even notice them.)

Perhaps you can ask one of your betas to describe what they think the story is about, that might help you figure out what to say in the enticing summary.

We're supposed to get that rain tomorrow night I've heard. Today we've had wonderfully sunny but not too hot weather and it's supposed to continue like this until tomorrow afternoon.

I knew I forgot something!

I think I'll call it 'George, Bungle and Zippy'. Then most people will read and go, the hell?

I couldn't have put it better myself! What on earth has those people/things to do with rainbows??!!
Edited Date: 2009-08-20 08:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-08-20 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahoni.livejournal.com
So close! \o/

Titles and summaries, argh. Those are tough. Although that summary you gave right there would actually entice me if I was an artist. It sounds pretty awesome! :D

What are 'quorn pieces'? I've never heard of them.

Date: 2009-08-20 08:34 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Bob2 ( samuelthecamel))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I suspect most people would see this continuity error, though I suppose I could hint the thing that needs to happen happenes off-screen *g*

That's a good idea about asking my betas. I'm joking about it here but it does need to be good and I am allowed to use a much longer summary for the artists. I just don't want to be passed over because of a sucky summary.

It's been raining really heavily today, and now it's cool and lovely. It may be the first time in weeks I'll sleep with a blanket.

I couldn't have put it better myself! What on earth has those people/things to do with rainbows??!!

They're characters from a kids TV show from when I was a kidlet. The show was called Rainbow. See, it fits, in my mind :D

Date: 2009-08-20 08:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Gerard smile)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I know! I suspect it'll be done by tomorrow then I'll let it lie for a while.

I hate titles and summaries. Mine always end up looking so lame, and then I'll be looking through delicious and see copy-pastes of my summary and cringe.

I'll have to keep that summary as a back-up, and remember to mention the unicorn with a light up horn *g*

You know, I wasn't even sure what quorn was made of, so hit wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quorn). I just use them as a veggie alternative to chicken.

Date: 2009-08-20 08:42 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (Default)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
That sounds like an excellent way to spend time.

How are things, btw? Any better yet.

Date: 2009-08-20 08:53 pm (UTC)
turlough: castle on mountain top in winter, Burg Hohenzollern (bob and frank make me happy)
From: [personal profile] turlough
Oh no you can't!! You so are going to write that scene miss, no weaseling out of it ;-P

Oh yes, it's perfectly clear now. OF COURSE that has to be the title of the story.

Date: 2009-08-20 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desticex.livejournal.com
I think I'll call it 'George, Bungle and Zippy'. Then most people will read and go, the hell?

And I, on the other hand, would read that and be SOLD. RAINBOWWW! That programme used to scare the crap out of me, but it holds a place in my heart all the same : D Also, lady bug jeans, WHAT. Hee. Eep, challenges FTW. Oh the fic to come! I am excited \o/

Date: 2009-08-21 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morebliss.livejournal.com
'George, Bungle and Zippy'

I LOVED THAT FUCKING SHOW! Zippy was my favourite. He was such a diva bitch! :D

Date: 2009-08-21 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mahoni.livejournal.com
That's awesome! It's great to have a story finished, isn't it?

Mine always end up looking so lame, and then I'll be looking through delicious and see copy-pastes of my summary and cringe

HEEE. I do that too. In SGA fandom, there was someone who would occasionally rec stories I wrote, and her summaries of my stories were always SO much better than mine, so I would end up going 'hey, can I use that?' :P

Date: 2009-08-21 09:35 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (Gerard smile)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Rainbow was such a weird show, and is tied so strongly to my childhood. Geoffrey was obviously the Pete of the day with his furry obsession *g*

The lady bug jeans are a thing! Frank likes to decorate his clothes.

I'm looking forward to the challenges so much! Though I still need to finish reading some Bandom Big Bang stories. If only there were more hours in the day.

Date: 2009-08-21 09:40 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (Patrick-Joe ( heart_beating ))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
HE WAS!

And now using that icon is making me bandom cast Rainbow, which is so wrong!


Date: 2009-08-21 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] runzu.livejournal.com
LOL That was my plan. I ended up entertaining and later on in the evening having a row with my dad. Then passing out on my pullout. *eye roll*

Things with Philadelphia's budget aren't going well. I'll make a post about it very shortly. *sigh*

Date: 2009-09-01 05:51 am (UTC)
frausorge: painting of a gray-faced figure in a maroon suit with shocked bulging eyes (believe)
From: [personal profile] frausorge
Titles are so so difficult! I tend to default to just using the first line of the story as a summary which is totally wimping out but at least is always an option. But titles OMG.

Date: 2009-09-01 07:31 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (OMG!)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Titles suck! Thankfully I managed to think of one but it took ages.

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